Gee I dunno.
We are talking 20 pages until something actually happens to the protagonist.
33 before I confirmed the she was a girl.
Episode 33 is a rip snorting ride of fun. Girl/boy realises her hair is too long. Girl cuts hair.
Episode 36- its a storm! Girl steers to the right!
Episode 37- steering to the right worked.... girl makes herself drink.
Compare this to Keeper of the Maser for example. Oodles of atmosphere and backstory but in a story.