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Offline Skrapwelder

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The Flying Cloud
« on: 04 December 2009, 01:52:16 PM »
Great ongoing story here:

http://airships.paulgazis.com/index.htm

I particularly enjoy the author's premise that the secret services derived from the naval signal corps. The signalman is a combination of Jeeves and James Bond.

Offline Gluteus Maximus

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Re: The Flying Cloud
« Reply #1 on: 05 December 2009, 02:12:26 PM »
Great ongoing story here:

http://airships.paulgazis.com/index.htm

I particularly enjoy the author's premise that the secret services derived from the naval signal corps. The signalman is a combination of Jeeves and James Bond.

Good find. I've only read the first episode but it looks like it will be fun  :)

Offline leadfool

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Re: The Flying Cloud
« Reply #2 on: 06 December 2009, 07:39:57 AM »
Very cool indeed, reminds me of a game I recently played????
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Offline Alcide Nikopol

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Re: The Flying Cloud
« Reply #3 on: 07 December 2009, 01:51:19 AM »
An outstanding discovery. Thank-you for sharing the link.
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Offline Sangennaru

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Re: The Flying Cloud
« Reply #4 on: 07 December 2009, 10:49:01 AM »
the link doesn't work on me... :(

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Re: The Flying Cloud
« Reply #5 on: 10 December 2009, 11:29:35 AM »
I enjoyed that - must keep an eye on it to see how it develops.

The spelling gives it away as being of American origin but even without that, I think it would immediately strike the British reader as not being home grown. The attempt to portray British characters is just ever so slightly not quite right. Doesn't really matter, I still read it all but it just shows how damn difficult characterisation is.

Doug


 

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