Well done - This is certainly one of the most entertaining Pulp Alley game reports I have read. Nice sense of humour and the events were all perfectly clear to me.
I do find with PA that because there is so much happening at the same time the game reports seem a little confusing, you have sorted order out of chaos, I very much enjoyed the read.
There's nothing more to say about Dave's scenery and figures, they are lovely, but you've presented the game in the best possible light.
I very much enjoyed it. Please do more.