Worth tidying up the overpaint of blue on the thighs of daisy duke and the midrift of Ash's sister. Not bad, but not brilliant either, something's going on with the lipstick, bit of a mime look there???
Maybe paint the chainsword in a constrasting colour as from the pics, it looks undercoated and only heavily drybrushed.
Same for the weapon on her back, just grey drybrush??

Also looks like you use a black undercoat, try prepping areas you want lighter first with a thinned grey or even white, the vest just looks grubby and too darkly shaded under her chest.
Finally, are you highlighting the bases or leaving as is?
Thanks for sharing
The Commander