Black templars battlebarge

[noigrim]

My scratchbuilding takes to the space!

http://noigrimintothemaelstorm.blogspot.com.es/2014/08/scratchbuilt-black-templars-battlebarge.html

[The_Beast]

Relative desert of comments about space ships, and now the deluge! How happy a day for a vacchead! 

Impressive, but there's quite a bit of jump between the ship hull and the smooth 'temple'. Would you consider greebling it up a bit? Maybe a surface of tiny windows?

Doug

[warburton]

Nice work, but I agree the temple could do with being somehow better integrated with the hull of the ship itself.

 

[Elbows]

I applaud the attempt as well, but the white bits are rather dis-jointed.  Also, what's the base for? (measurement purposes?)  If you can integrate the white bits better and give it a decent flying base I'd say you're in good shape.