I like the in universe approach taken here. I wrote from an omniscient narrator's perspective and basically described them briefly and then some bits and bobs I could think of.
Thanks. I know it is a bit long winded but I did not write it thinking to actually be chosen so much as just as a fun mental exercise.
The 4 leg design rather than 6 is an interesting decision.
Could WGA be using some of the same artists as Defiance Games did? That would explain the similarities.